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I wanted her hands
oh those hands of
porcelain woe

I delicately sawed
through skin and bone,
down where shy lilies
bloomed

and I took them home
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~UkeBug Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
I love disturbing poems.
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Mood: Love ~SoundlessWhispers Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy to hear it. Me too :D
I'm hoping I'll be able to further improve that particular aspect of my poetry in the future.
Thank you: I appreciate your thoughts and comment (:
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~UkeBug Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
You betcha! I read this out-loud to my sister and after the shock of the disturbing image wore off, she smiled like I did. XD
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~SoundlessWhispers Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha I'm glad your sister enjoyed it, too. :)
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~UkeBug Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
She did. And she's not into literature. That says something about your talents.
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Mood: Love ~SoundlessWhispers Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw :tighthug: So sweet
A hug for you and your sister.

You both have just made my day :D
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~UkeBug Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
You bet, Lovely!
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